Mushaboom's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hunger Knows No Friend]

Brilliant!

That was one of the most brilliant flash-films I've seen with such simple animation and drawings. Seriously, that was really good, it had an overall artsy feeling and a good pick in music for this little scene. I enjoyed how this built itself up to something to remember. Liked it, keep them coming.

[(Pablo)HuevoSplash]

Nice

That was alright, man, I enjoyed it. Could expand a bit on the graphics, though, but it got the point across clearly. It's scary how much the Pablo Francisco sounds like Dane Cook. But good flash, keep 'em coming.

[The swalow]

Poor little emo swallow...

That was pretty good, I enjoyed it. Polish up the drawings a bit and take out the spelling and grammar mistakes and this makes a fine flash. Keep 'em coming.

[Emo*Globin]

What you had was alright...

But there's a lot to add, think of backgrounds, perhaps a story line, because I can't really see how this has anything to do with emo culture except maybe their hair. It should've been longer. Nice touch with the single eye, though.

[Smooth Grandmama]

That was pure awesomeness!

Seriously, I can't think of anything to improve on, it was hilarious. Maybe, as the user before me already said, improve the drawings a bit and maybe add some subtitles. But that was incredibly right-on, keep em coming, this is going into my fav's.

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Thanks! I'm working on a storyboard for a new one now :)

[Spoots]

Nice little story

It had me laughing at the sinking bit, that was great. It does however lack music, which is a shame. You could polish up the graphics and the synching a bit more, in order to give the flash a bit more depth. I did really enjoy the story and the randomness of the dialogue. Keep them coming, I liked this.

[Ikkle and Toad - 1]

It was funny.

However, your animation and drawing leave a lot to wish for. Also the voice - and I'm sure you'll get to hear this a lot if it's passed - reminds me a lot of illwillpress' Foamy from the Neurotically Yours series. Good effort, though, it had humor to it and some pretty good panning. Keep making them.

Kamize responds:

Fair review, thanks. Yeah I realize that the animation and graphics could have been a lot better, but at least it was funny xD. I also liked your flash, kind of dark, but you obviously put more work into it than I did into this.

All I did with my voice was speed it up 100%, maybe that's what iwillpress did too.

Thanks again.

[Super Smash Bros. Murder]

Whoo!

That was pretty good! I like the Hollywood feel it has to it. Might improve a bit on sound, though, maybe add some subtitles, because some parts weren't too clear. Carry on with this series, though, I like it.

[Beautiful Pico Day]

Too bad

This had some really good graphics going on, it's such a shame that you turned the flash into such a simple loop. Keep the graphics and add a plot and some other characters and this should be a good Pico Day submission.
-M

ShortMonkey responds:

I understand what you mean, but I'm not going to put heaps of effort into a Pico movie because I don't really have time. Thanks for the review.

[The Legend of IronHeart]

Good

That was funny, I enjoyed it. The only criticism I have is that the drawings were finished a bit simplistic from time to time, but that can really be overlooked. It was good, I gave it a 4.